Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts

Thursday, October 26, 2017

Week 10 Storytelling: A Tale of the First Men and the First Death

I was the first man. Well, I was one among the first men during the beginning of the world. In that time, there was no sun and the only light we had was in our houses. You see, in the before time water could burn like oil, so we always had a light going to shelter us from the abyss beyond. I don't remember much of my childhood. I remember willow bushes and being cold. Then I recall my mother's face. She was the first warmth I had ever felt. Then I saw my father. Together they brought up my brothers and sisters. Clothing and feeding us food from the earth. Soon, more people came and grew up with us. Men became husbands and women became wives. More children were born. Soon my family grew very large.

As good as it was to have soon many relatives, I wanted a friend. Someone different from me, that had strengths and weaknesses that complimented my own. So I went out with a rope and began to hit it on the ground saying, "Hok! Hok! Hok!".

As I did, dogs formed from the snowy hills and came to me, so then my friends arrived. I played with my dogs for many days and they, too, multiplied. Soon I met my wife and had many children with her. My family grew ever larger. As the years went on, I grew older and older. I have now gone blind, and have become lame. I simply wish to die.

Two of my sisters who share my fate speak thus: "It is better to live in darkness, if we can be without death!"

"No!" I said, "For I would have my children to have light and my self be able to lie down."

As I spoke, my words became reality.

The sun began to rise above the horizon, and light streamed over the hills, melting away the snow. Everyone walked out of their homes and was stunned by the beauty.

Presently, I am standing in the light. Though I cannot see it with my eyes, my body and soul are warmed by its presence. I feel it calling me up to it. Am I to be the first to die?

My body remains laying on the warm ground as I lift myself toward the sun, the source of light and my own death. For with the sun comes time. But the darkness will soon fall on my children again, so I shall give myself as I light to them. Every night I will rise to smile on my children and keep the darkness that I knew in my life from them forever.
The souls of those who have died watching over the night sky; Source: Pixabay

Author's Note: The original story was about how the first men came to earth and grew in populations. Most of my story has similar details to the original, only mine is told as though being recounted by the first man to die. In the original, those who died went into the sky to become a star, which I hinted at near the end.

Source: Eskimo Folk-Tales by Knud Rasmussen with illustrations by native Eskimo artists (1921).

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Eskimo Folk Tales, Part B

Papik, Who Killed His Wife's Brother-

I really want to retell this one from the perspective of one of the hunters who saw the beast fall onto Papik. I really love monsters and curses in myths and folklore, so this is definitely down my alley. I might expand more on a single hunter and make up some kind of backstory about how he knew papik and the curse his mother in law placed on him. 

The monster is described as a bear. Source: Pixabay

Source: Eskimo Folk-Tales by Knud Rasmussen with illustrations by native Eskimo artists (1921).

Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Eskimo Folk Tales, Part A

The Coming of Men:

This has got to be one of my favorite creation stories thematically. The breaking of the stereotypical sun bringing life is very interesting. In this story, the sun brought death unto people, but in return they could leave their homes and hunt. I would really enjoy writing a story from the perspective of one of these 'first men'. Maybe I could even write the life story of the first man to die, who just couldn't figure out how to die. I could also have him recounting the events of his life, like when the first woman found him and made him clothes, or when he found the dogs. Lots of possibilities with this one.

The Giant Dog:

This is a strange story with an unusual twist at the end, but I like that. I could write the story from the perspective of the man who owns the giant dog, or even a frightened villager recounting the tales of this monstrous beast.


Source: Eskimo Folk-Tales by Knud Rasmussen with illustrations by native Eskimo artists (1921).

Image:Drawing of a giant dog lifting a sleeping man out of bed. Main illustration for the story "The Fangs of Tsan-Lo". Internal illustration from the Canadian reprint edition of the pulp magazine Weird Tales (January 1946, vol. 38, no. 3, page 77). Source: Wikimedia