Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, September 14, 2017

Week 4 Story: The Guilt of David and the Sorrow of Bathsheba

The party had finally begun. All of the king's best warriors, were present.  Eleazar, Ishbaal, Shammah, Absalom, and David sat in the seats of honor, elevated above the other tables. Michal, Maachah, Abigail, and David's other wives sat off to the right whispering among themselves. Bathsheba, Sat on the left, holding David's new-born, among the king's daughters.She had asked him to let her sit among the other wives, but he refused claiming they held animosity for her. She knew this claim was valid. Ever since they married, she could hear them talking behind her back. Things like "She married the king so quickly after her husband's death." and "Well he only married her because of the love he had for Uriah. In fact, she should be a concubine if anything." and other insults were all too familiar to her. They weren't wrong, in her mind. She was the daughter of a soldier and the widow of a soldier. She held no right to be the king's wife. The child began to stir in her arms as the king rose with a cup in his hand.


"Friends, brothers! On this day, we celebrate!" he shouted as the audience cheered him on, "For on this day, the Lord has delivered us. He covered these brave men as they fought and repelled the Philistine invaders! Truly the Lord is a mighty lion!"

The audience roared with applause. Bathsheba couldn't help but filled with pride at her husband's ability to command respect. She knew the child in her arms would be a great man too. She looked down at him to comfort his squirming body, and when she looked back up, her eyes met David's. She could see his smile form underneath his thick black beard.

As the crowd cheered, Joab son of Zeruiah shouted "Surely the line of David will rule forever! Hail King David! Hail! Hail!"

The rest of the room began cheering "Hail". The men all rose and saluted their king. The band began to play a triumphant melody as the party began to grow in chaos. The wine was flowing and the laughter could be heard on the outer wall of the City of David. Gareb the Ithrite approached the king in merriment and bowed low. He remarked, "You have been blessed, my king. If only Uriah were alive to see this day, and know his sacrifice was not in vain."

Bathsheba heard this and quickly turned to David. She saw his smile fade, and his eye cast down. He never talked about him. She didn't like to think of it either. She became pregnant with the king's child while her husband was away at war. Uriah died on the front lines shortly after the king found out about the child. She didn't like to think of it, what hand the king might have had in her husband's death. "Yes, I'm sure he..." David started slowly trying to find his words.

"He would be proud." Bathsheba said reassuringly. David turned his head to her. He looked down to the child and his smile returned.

Then he turned again and faced the back of the room. That's when she heard two small cymbals clashing together from the front of the room near the entrance. A small child could be seen entering the room with a man behind him. Bathsheba had never seen him before, but David seemed familiar with him. "I bring a message for the king!" The man called out.

The clatter in the room died down, and an eerie silence fell upon them. The man made his way to the table of honor, and looked up to David. "Will the king hear me out?"

David looked about and replied, "Nathan, the king will always have time for a prophet of the Lord! Give me your message."

Bathsheba sat as Nathan told a story of a man with many sheep and lambs, and another with only one lamb that he loved. She sat rocking her child, and she not once looked up to the men talking. She just looked into her child's face. She remembered the night David sent for her to come to his bed chamber. She would've denied him, but she had been alone for so long and who denies a king? She missed her husband, but her new life was far better than her old. She snapped back to the conversation when she heard David cry out in anger, "Surely, this rich man should be put to death! Bring him here! He will repay the poor man tenfold for what he has done!"

Bathsheba looked to Nathan as he said, "That man stands here before us all. For you are the man!"

David stood did not move or speak, and the crowd stood silent as Nathan continued, "This is what the Lord, the God of Israel, says: Why have you hated me? I gave you victory over all your enemies! I gave you the kingdom of Saul and the Wives' of Saul! Everything you do succeeded! But now you have despised my word and done evil in my sight. You stole Uriah's lamb from him." Nathan shouted and pointed at Bathsheba, "And when you couldn't convince him to go home and sleep with her, you had your lackeys send him to his death in battle and stole her for yourself."

Bathsheba could not believe what she heard. She saw Joab lower his head and quietly leave the room. She had hoped it wasn't true, but she knew from Joab's reaction that is was. He was the commander at Uriah's last battle. Suddenly, it made sense. She felt a deep unease in her stomach as the baby began to stir and whine.

Absalom began to raise up to approach Nathan, but David grabbed him and made him sit back down.

Nathan looked at Absalom and back to Daivd, "Now the Lord will strike all these from you. Your kingdom will be taken from you, your wives will be taken from you. All by someone close to you, someone you trust with your life. You betrayed Uriah's trust, and so too shall they betray yours! What you did in the dark, he will do before all Israel!"

Once Nathan finished, the silence was deafening. David stood and walked to Nathan. Bathsheba was certain he was about to end the man's life. But instead, he fell to his face, and cried aloud, "I have sinned against the Lord." and continued to sob in front of the crowd.



"Rise David Ben Yishai. The Lord has taken away your sin. You will not die, but someone must." Nathan said was sadness as he turned to Bathsheba.

Later, after Nathan and the party guests left, the baby began coughing in Bathsheba's arms. She pleaded with God for the child to return to good health for seven days. But on the seventh, his breath stopped. Heart broken, she wondered the halls of the palace at night, sobbing silently. That's when she heard her husband, whom she had not seen all week. He sang a song to God in his room. He sat naked upon the floor as he sang, "Clean my with hyssop, and I will be clean. Wash me and I will be whiter than snow. Let me hear joy and gladness. Let the bones you have crushed rejoice! Hide your face from my sins, and blot out all my iniquity."

He looked up and saw her watching him. He bade her to come in and sit with him. They sat in each other's embrace and that night conceived the child who would one day be the king of Israel.

Author's Note: I wanted to tell the story from the eyes of Bathsheba as she isn't really mentioned much in the original story, but it none the less effected her quite a bit. The setting of a grand party makes the rebuking of David by Nathan even more powerful as many people who were there (such as Joab) would've known about Uriah's assassination. I also wanted to emphasis David's humility in the story, as I feel like it wouldn't have been as powerful if it had been a private conversation. I also chose to throw in some of Psalm 51, as it is known to have been written after all this took place, so naturally David would be composing it in that time.

Bibliography: The King James Bible (2 Samuel & Psalms)

Image: Nathan confronts David, painted by Emanuel Granberg; Source: Wikimedia Commons

Wednesday, September 13, 2017

Readin Notes: Women of the Bible,Part B

The Witch of Endor-
This is a great illustration of what a leader shouldn't do. After Saul had declared witchcraft illegal and killed or sent away all the sorcerers, he then seeks out a witch himself to bring some peace to him. Samuel doesn't offer any peace, though. I would really enjoy writing this story as the witch would've seen it. Perhaps even having her familiar spirit be a demon in disguise, using her to fool and deceive people who come to her, only to be overpowered by the spirit of Samuel who actually appears instead of an illusion. I noticed how in the story she "cried with a loud voice". I don't know if that is to say she was afraid when she saw Samuel (like she isn't use to actual dead people appearing) or if she just realized who Saul was.

Bathsheba-
This story recounts one of the darkest times in King David's life. If I retold this one, it would be set in the court room of David when Nathan rebukes David for what he did. I believe that moment is the emotional culmination of the story and would be the most fun to write. As far as making the story my own, I'd probably add in details like who was in the room and add extra dialogue that the original story doesn't have. I might also dabble with the idea of making it from the point of view of Bathsheba. That could bring more light on what she thought of the whole situation and how she would've reacted to Nathan and David's words.


Bibliography: King James Bible (2 Samuel)
Image: Nathan rebukes David in Court. Painted by Eugéne Siberdt; Source: Wikimedia Commons

Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Reading Notes: Women of the Bible, Part A

Eve and the Serpent-

I've actually just finished studying this story, and would love to write about it. The only thing is, I'd really like to do it from God's perspective (or Satan's) because it would offer the most impact. But if I were to follow the theme of 'Women of the Bible' I should probably do it from Eve's perspective. I suppose I could try to pull that off. It would be more challenging for me, but maybe could deepen my understanding of the story.

The Slave and the Wife (Hagar and Sarah)-

This would be a fun story to explore from Hagar's perspective. Bearing a child for your master then being sent away because his actual wife got pregnant. That's a lot of emotion and sadness. I would probably start the story near the end of the biblical story and have Hagar recall the events at the well. Or perhaps have her talking to her newly acquired daughter-in-law or even grandchild about the story and promise God made to her.


Bibliography: King James Bible (Genesis)
Image: Abraham sending Hagar and Ishmael away. Created by Gustave Doré (1866); Source: Wikimedia Commons